Title:TheBestChristmasGift
Author:Ivan Parvov
Illustrator:Ivan Parvov
Pages:22
Summary:This is story of warming heart.
This story of main character is Bubu. He is a small fox and don't like in winter. But, He likes the best Christmas on seasons.It is because, santa claus comes to gift many prezents for many childrens. So, he likes
christmas and exciting the previous christmas day. One day, it is like a red sack dropped beyond the dark forest. He went there and opened it. It was many presents. He thought that it is santa claus's sack. He reported it to many houses a substitute for santa claus. However, he became a stay child. So, He sleeped in the rea sack. When he had feeled farm and woke up, he was at his home. He thought that it is dreaming. But his father and his mother stayed in a his presence. He was very glad to meet his pearens. His father said open your present. But he said "I already got the best christmas gift. This night I found out that the only thing I want for cristmas is to be home with you and mommy. This is better than a sack full of gifts.
Comment:I thougt this is a good warming heart story and Bubu has a warm heat. It is because, he said " I alredy got the best cristmas gift. This night I found out that the thing i want for cristmas is to be home with you and mommy. This is better than a sack full of gifts." I think that I want to cristmas prezent too. So, I think he has a good heart. And I want to become like Bubu.
Comment:I thougt this is a good warming heart story and Bubu has a warm heat. It is because, he said " I alredy got the best cristmas gift. This night I found out that the thing i want for cristmas is to be home with you and mommy. This is better than a sack full of gifts." I think that I want to cristmas prezent too. So, I think he has a good heart. And I want to become like Bubu.
Hi Shi-zu,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your first report. It was well done and you reported on the story well. You had many grammar and spelling mistakes. Please make sure to spell-check your work before you publish it. If you don't understand how to do that, please ask me.